The door opened with a grrrrrrr….. I was happy and scared, both
at the same time. A place that once used to be filled with giggles, laughter and
love, is now declared haunted by the people in its neighborhood.
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| Copyright-Janet Webb |
As I entered the hall, I saw a big mirror. My father has
bought it especially for my mother. Lost in my memories, I felt a presence of
someone and then suddenly something touch my feet. Nothing was there when I
look around. I got completely terrified and was about to scream,when I saw a big rat
running towards the door.
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Nice twist, I was waiting for a ghost.
ReplyDeleteYikes - a rat - not a mouse - I'm scared now. Very cleverly written!
ReplyDeleteNan :)
Dear Natasha,
ReplyDeleteRats! Uck! Quite a twist. I think I'd prefer the ghost.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Natasha, I'm not surprised there's a rat in an abandoned house. I hope she doesn't get bitten. Surprise ending as I was also expecting a ghost. Well written. : ) ---Susan
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